齐君子 (打招呼) 于 08-27 19:44:35 发表

文笔还算不错但是有点嫩了?记得换

文笔还算不错但是有点嫩了?记得换行很重要,不然看起来很乱,你这篇文最起码文案还算不错,顺便一说,性格尽量少用什么冷酷啊冷漠啊,换成面瘫就好一点,毕竟网上黑的有点多,不知道作者授权给出了么,有改成广播剧的意愿,作者能留下企鹅么沟通下?

#1楼 齐君子 (打招呼) 于 08-27 19:45:12 发表
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